Saturday, February 17, 2018

The Female Bird Comments

Rating: 4.8

Usually he does not take so much time.
He always came back in the nest well in time
to relieve me from incubation of eggs.
And then I flew out to search the grains
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Khalid Saifullah 05 April 2018

a beautiful poem, ..........................

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Sophy Chen 20 February 2018

A very touching poem, birds in your poem are just as humans ourselves. I would like to translate this poem into Chinese and put it in my magazine, Sophy Poetry & Translation Internatinal Edition and thanks for your sharing Akhtar. Sophy Chen in China

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2018

Rest here sweetheart on the eggs these eggs will be incubated. I shall go out, I shall bring grains for you, and I shall feed you...what a magnificent theme! An elegant piece of poetry dear sir....10

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 February 2018

A great poem of so many messages, the poet raised his voice against hunting of birds, described the importance of a female spouse, in bad time a female spouse takes care of her spouse just like she takes care of her children,

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Khairul Ahsan 17 February 2018

Oh, what a lovely thought! Loved the scenario! Female species overpower their male counterparts in love as well in ferocity (of course, not true to all!) ! ' What if you would not have created the Eve for the Adam! ' - And also created Adam for eve.

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