Thursday, February 9, 2012

The Feelings I Feel Comments

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The feelings i feel for you are unreal
The feelings i feel are made of steel
The feelings i feel are broken-hearted ones
The feelings i feel can never be undone
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Steph McBride
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Jitendra Kumar Sahoo 12 June 2012

good feelings are coming by reading this poem

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Gaylord Munemo 02 March 2012

good expression, so perfect

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Martin O'Neill 21 February 2012

These are sweet love poems Steph. The only thing I would change is the spelling of 'know'. You have used 'no' which is a negative and jars in the wrong context. Keep writing.

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