The Feel Poem by Bharati Nayak

The Feel

Rating: 5.0


I know not, whether you still feel,
I know notwhetherthe fire is kindling,
I know not whether the Raja festival,
Or the Kumar Purnima bring
The feel of cake or the moon
But with the approach of every festival
i wander to the pleasant past
Where lie myjoy treasured
I know not whether future will ever bring
The lost laughter, bliss and delight.

Tuesday, July 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 14 October 2019

Poor heart, it always wants what is not. in youth we dream the carefree days of childhood, in old age we miss the youth of body and mind, in summer we miss the wintry chill, in winter the warm sun still! A lovely piece on yearning.

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C F 24 August 2019

A gem of a poem... quite a refreshing read.10+

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Bri Edwards 02 August 2019

I like this. Could it be your thoughts (or just your imagination?) longing for someone ….or more than one ……. [see line # 1] in your past? ? Or something in your past? ? As for me, Bri, the Raj festival definitely makes ME have the ‘feel’ of cake AND ice cream! Bri :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 July 2019

Many of your poems I cannot read, so I do the next best thing, re-read the older ones again and enjoy them once again.

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Prabir Gayen 20 July 2019

I know not whether future will ever bring The lost laughter, bliss and delight... ..Change is painful

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2022

Beautiful. Appreciated the very core of this excellent poem. Top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 October 2021

Or the Kumar Purnima bring The feel of cake or the moon....I feel it. A great poem dear poetess.....5 stars.

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

excellent poem with very attractive and emotional affect, provoking thoughts, but don't worry always the past will stay alive in our memories 10/10 and into my treasure chest

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

But with the approach of every festival i wander to the pleasant past Where lie myjoy treasured I know not whether future will ever bring The lost laughter, bliss and delight.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2019

Feelings! ! ! To the pleasant past! ! ! ! Muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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