What lies beyond the sunset?
Opening hues
Twinkling stars
A waking moon
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what lies...? ? ? lovely questions... I loved the structure of your FEATHERS! each stanza begins and ends by a QUESTION the content is philosophically expressed! nice nice! ! ! I gave you a feathery 10 Thanks For Sharing/
What lies beyond our life? A funeral pyre A dirge, a monument A rebirth, the voice of the earth Or the feathers we left in our cage? The real quest for a meaning of lif. Thanks for this nice poem. 10 for it. Subhas