Wednesday, February 11, 2009

The Feathers Comments

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What lies beyond the sunset?
Opening hues
Twinkling stars
A waking moon
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Ravi Panamanna
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 August 2017

What lies beyond our life? A funeral pyre A dirge, a monument A rebirth, the voice of the earth Or the feathers we left in our cage? The real quest for a meaning of lif. Thanks for this nice poem. 10 for it. Subhas

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

what lies...? ? ? lovely questions... I loved the structure of your FEATHERS! each stanza begins and ends by a QUESTION the content is philosophically expressed! nice nice! ! ! I gave you a feathery 10 Thanks For Sharing/

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Ravi Panamanna

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Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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