Wednesday, March 23, 2016

The Fearful Path Comments

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'Honk Honk Honk' A normal sound to me now.
They fly over head formed in the character after 'U'.
The sight of them is unnerving, sweat drips from my brow.
They determine the path I choose.
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Hector Les Cor
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Chinedu Dike 26 March 2016

Lovely poem well brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows - a shadow has no substance, it's usually a magnified reflection of something small, that's why upon facing fear squarely one usually finds it inconsequential. A beautiful piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Hector. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Timothy Mcpoetry 23 March 2016

Such bravery! Thank you for sharing. I feel an instant fraternal bond with you Hector! I was always afraid of gators as a youth in Alabama - nice to hear that other people must face their own 'gators'!

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Hector Les Cor

Hector Les Cor

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