The Fear Of Nada Comments

A very lovely poem. It's well-thought out but I believe you should break it into stanzas or paragraphs; just big blocks of texts can be straining to the eyes.

This is beautiful. It tells of love and desire that is so overwhelming to you, that you think only of how to keep her with you, always. This tells of need for another, for them to hold you, and claim you as theirs, as you wish to claim them yours. This is... stunning. Thank you very much for inviting me to read this. G