Tuesday, April 8, 2014

The Fear Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.4

Your love flowed gently over me,
Like a wave caressing the shore,
Touching me... then covering me...
Leaving me begging for more
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Lora Colon
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 December 2022

Really can relate to this poem Bravo Top 5 kudos

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2022

The chain of love is just a slender thread.... it's your perception but can be very much generalized. Loved this beautiful poem.

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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2018

Brilliant, thought provoking, intense, clear and very passionate. Well expressed thoughts and feelings set aside for sober reflection. Heartfelt poem with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Lora.

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Bipasha D 25 January 2018

You have captured love and its uncertainties perfectly. Warm Regards, Bipasha

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Dave Lessard 30 August 2016

Good write on the wonder of love.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2015

This chain of love. Nice work.

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Claudine Riel 02 December 2015

I just love this poem. It sums it up beautifully. Love is definitely scary to me as you can imagine, from the loss of my biological mother at birth, and again later on when I found out she had past at the age of 54. Yes, love and the heart is so fragile. Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2015

Nice work! With the sweet muse of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 11 October 2015

love is SOMEtimes only in the eye(s) [really 'mind' and 'heart'] of the one seeking love........... desperately-seeking or not-so-desparately.. that said, i've always? been apprehensive about the word love and the feeling love, EXCEPT, of course, when it comes to my feelings for ice cream, cake, pie, candy (not so much) , pastry, and ice cream [can't have too much ice cream, can one? ]. i've loved my share (maybe more) of women, as far as i understood the word for my own use. i've also liked some women AND men; so much so that it is more comfortable for me to be around, or communicating with, a person i like than a person i love, at least SOMEtimes! ! now, i consider myself somewhat experienced, having been married four times (three divorces) and having had a few girlfriends (when i was NOT married!) . if one cares to read more of my comments on this poem, please see my first comment left three months ago. another 'nice' one by my friend Lora. bri :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 September 2015

Touching me... then covering me... Leaving me begging for more...healing of the wounds....light in darkness, warmth in winter nights....The song that I heard was you.....Yet, I'm gripped by fear this chain of love Is no more than a slender thread.........The psychologists say that there is always fear accompanying in a love affair. Fear of losing, fear of offending, fear of being loved, fear of separation... so goes the list. you have portrayed that all in your poem. thank you.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 14 July 2015

love at its zenith...loving somebody passionately and in return being loved with the same intensity makes us to think sometimes. we doubt the continuance and remain in dilemma.this is nothing but just the negative energy which must be overcomed by the positive one.Great lines depicting fear of love.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 05 June 2015

Fragility love...tenderness of love, that's just a real aspect of love. Thanks for sharing

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 June 2014

A great love poem, it touches the depths of any heart that knows what love is.Great.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 27 May 2014

Good morning Poet Lora. Well, what is left to say. One would be hard pressed to find a more beautiful, passionate filled poem of love. This was spell bindingly beautiful! Well done, Loyd

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 April 2014

it's amazing Lora how you capture the essence of love in this poem! the heart finds it too fragile to endure.

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Bill Cantrell 08 April 2014

...The song I heard was you, What a great line. Your poem is wonderful, full of rhyme and had that feeling of..love being too good to be true in it. Good write

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