Sunday, December 21, 2008

The Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

come with me to the moon
I will not be afraid from dark
come with me to the sun
I will not be afraid from burn
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Nouzad Jaadan
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Dead Leaf 21 April 2012

Really a nice poem... good work

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Blue Eyes 10 January 2009

very nice poem. i hope u write some more.well done.

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Little Hatila ;) 30 December 2008

wow, very nicely written, we all have to be afraid of loneliness....10 Hataw

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 December 2008

Fear of loneliness has overshadowed the love in this poem...A simple and beautiful write.

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Malini Kadir 21 December 2008

Fear of loneliness brought out very well here....keep writing.....good efforts...

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