Friday, January 3, 2003

The Faun Sees Snow For The First Time Comments

Rating: 2.9

Zeus,
Brazen-thunder-hurler,
Cloud-whirler, son-of-Kronos,
Send vengeance on these Oreads
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Richard Aldington
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Richard 10 January 2018

Nice poem, I liked the words. Poem about Bambi?

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2017

Nicely written When I stamp my hoof The frozen-cloud-specks jam into the cleft So that I reel upon two slippery points...

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Susan Williams 06 February 2016

Hmmmm... felt like I was reading two poems jammed together, each were good in their own way but the moods do not blend together... and I really prefer the faun half

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2016

Over the brown trees with the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 06 February 2016

Not so lovely poem, but Rajnish is right about the message in the last two lines.

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Rajnish Manga 06 February 2016

Lovely poem emanating from Roman Gods and Mythology carries a message for man. Fool, to stand here cursing When I might be running!

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Richard Aldington

Richard Aldington

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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