Tuesday, November 14, 2017

The Fathers Comments

Rating: 4.6

Some let their children fly
Free as the birds in the sky
Others spare the rod
A few left them on their own
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 20 September 2022

So beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Ever so very heart moving! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 20 September 2022

For we are all sculpted by the loving hands of God! .. Such a Beautiful, beautiful tribute, thoughts and sentiments to Fathers! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 20 September 2022

Wow! .. Such precious words, such precious meaning and heart! ..

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Anjandev Roy 27 January 2020

Such a brilliant write. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 September 2019

I am a proud father of a magnificent daughter. Thank you for this wonderful poem. But, i don’t know where do I fit myself in the poem...

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Jane Campion 08 July 2019

In the arms of a loving father a child feels secure. A wonderful poem dear Rose.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2019

Dear Poetess I most adore, from all the stanzas in your precious poem, the last stanza, I cite a few lines: We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time................This is the most important part of the sublime poem, sweetest worded I so admired. These lines give me such a well balanced feeling. Long after, they keep still echoing in my inside. A 10 Full Score for this amazing timeless poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 December 2018

A poem which delves into the role of the father in a family, from different points of view: character, tradition, culture, etc. and the later impact on the development of the children. A great perceptive poem!

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Abhipsa Panda 04 December 2018

a great tribute to all fathers...thanks for sharing....

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Dipti Deori Borah 11 November 2018

A beautiful poem..heart touching

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2018

Yet, we must always love Our fathers no matter what It is one of God's commands We are not here by chance We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time.......touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem on ' The Fathers ' nicely executed.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 November 2018

We are not here by chance We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time.. the last stanza really touched me......... this is a great praise of the fathers and how they influence the children........ a very nice poem dear poetess. Marie Juan. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2018

Yet, we must always love/Our fathers no matter what/It is one of God's commands/We are not here by chance/We were all made/From a capsule of love......lovely expression dear Rose! This beautiful poem always drags me to a lovely world! Excellent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 June 2018

Dear Rose, you have so movingly painted the different types of fathers and different qualities of father. The children who are sheltered in the arms of loving fathers are happy and lucky. The following lines are more impressive...... Yet, we must always love Our fathers no matter what It is one of God's commands We are not here by chance We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time. Brilliant poem.10

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Robert Murray Smith 19 May 2018

This ode to fathers covers all omissions.++10

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A wonderfu poem Rose. I love poems written about parents because they are the reason we are here today. We cannot deny or forget that. I loved the way you have woven a tale about the fathers. It flows with love and melody. Very beautifully crafted.10+++

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Geeta, thank you so much for this wonderful comment. I feel honored.

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Maverick_24279 24 April 2018

Very good poem about fathers...10+++

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Your comment and visit are much appreciated..Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2018

Simply it's a lovely poem....Oh, how lucky and happy/Those children who are sheltered/In the arms of their loving fathers....loved reading it Rose..............10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 January 2018

Thank you so much for the great comment, Dr.Dillip.

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Luo Zhihai 21 January 2018

Austin, such a heartwarming write...10++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2018

A great comment, Lou. Thank you for the visit.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2018

In the arms of their loving fathers! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 January 2018

Thanks, Edward for the visit and great comment.

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