Some let their children fly
Free as the birds in the sky
Others spare the rod
A few left them on their own
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For we are all sculpted by the loving hands of God! .. Such a Beautiful, beautiful tribute, thoughts and sentiments to Fathers! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Wow! .. Such precious words, such precious meaning and heart! ..
I am a proud father of a magnificent daughter. Thank you for this wonderful poem. But, i don’t know where do I fit myself in the poem...
In the arms of a loving father a child feels secure. A wonderful poem dear Rose.
Dear Poetess I most adore, from all the stanzas in your precious poem, the last stanza, I cite a few lines: We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time................This is the most important part of the sublime poem, sweetest worded I so admired. These lines give me such a well balanced feeling. Long after, they keep still echoing in my inside. A 10 Full Score for this amazing timeless poem.
A poem which delves into the role of the father in a family, from different points of view: character, tradition, culture, etc. and the later impact on the development of the children. A great perceptive poem!
Yet, we must always love Our fathers no matter what It is one of God's commands We are not here by chance We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time.......touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem on ' The Fathers ' nicely executed.
We are not here by chance We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time.. the last stanza really touched me......... this is a great praise of the fathers and how they influence the children........ a very nice poem dear poetess. Marie Juan. tony
Yet, we must always love/Our fathers no matter what/It is one of God's commands/We are not here by chance/We were all made/From a capsule of love......lovely expression dear Rose! This beautiful poem always drags me to a lovely world! Excellent!
Dear Rose, you have so movingly painted the different types of fathers and different qualities of father. The children who are sheltered in the arms of loving fathers are happy and lucky. The following lines are more impressive...... Yet, we must always love Our fathers no matter what It is one of God's commands We are not here by chance We were all made From a capsule of love At a given God's time. Brilliant poem.10
A wonderfu poem Rose. I love poems written about parents because they are the reason we are here today. We cannot deny or forget that. I loved the way you have woven a tale about the fathers. It flows with love and melody. Very beautifully crafted.10+++
Geeta, thank you so much for this wonderful comment. I feel honored.
Simply it's a lovely poem....Oh, how lucky and happy/Those children who are sheltered/In the arms of their loving fathers....loved reading it Rose..............10
In the arms of their loving fathers! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
So beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Ever so very heart moving! ..