Saturday, July 13, 2013

The Father Awaits Comments

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Last night I dreamt I went back into your arms again.
You beckoned me like a long lost friend.
We drifted away with nary a sound.
Family that had once been gone were now all around.
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Serena Silenced
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Khairul Ahsan 25 July 2013

I know I will see you again at the pearly gates. For now I am bound to spread the message – The Father awaits. Wonderful!

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Randy Crossette 14 July 2013

See all Fathers are not bad...not according to you anyhow! Of course the father that you speak of lets millions of his children suffer in the most horrible ways every day until they finally die and pass away so when you think of things like that Father waiting doesn't sound as good does it?

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Gajanan Mishra 13 July 2013

way to heaven, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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