Tuesday, April 3, 2012

The Fate Of Love Comments

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The sky is limitless dome,
All the planets are jewells,
The night looks pretty home,
There is beauty where love dwells,
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Dave Walker 18 April 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 April 2012

Nicely written, Muzzammil. You have assessed the situation very well. Great poem. Loved it.

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Ata Ata 04 April 2012

It is nicely written.Personally, I believe that love hasn't walls, barriers, castes and so on.Love is free and heart can feel what it wishes itself.Sometimes the heart will never get this right answer, however still it is worth to feel.

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Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

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