The Fate Of A Child Comments

you know fate is a funny thing, sometimes it can throw you for a loop lets just hope that fate is kind to one of them.....all in all great job i loved it

Yes, but this is an entirely conventional sentiment. The question is: how to create a new angle.

I love the scheme of this poem, its a believable portrayal of a sad reality for some children right after being born. If born at all.