The Fate Comments

lovely poem with joy and pain Once wrote raat kii ankhon me aansu shabnam ke hai/ koii poche inse khushiyon ke hain ya gam ke hai/ Initially I wrote Teears of the night or pearls of the day woos o stars or dancing feathers gay (O my Almighty) nice loved it 10

Everything happens for a reason Kumar! !

Everything happens for a reason Kumar.

again the last line is golden....u end ur poems in the best possible way my frnd! ...perfect!

Our fate is something that we have no control over. We just have too live each day trusting that we will overcome what happens to us. Our fate and future is in Gods plans. A thoughtful write.

I really nice poem with conflicting emotions that can so easily torment someone.