Wednesday, June 20, 2012

The Farmer's Morn… Comments

Rating: 4.6

on the track of morning bird
yolk on shoulder whistled on
untilled his field, he'd left a third
by dusk t'wd be over and done
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Yasmin Khan 30 April 2013

The village lore is told with compassion and love. Simple diction suits well the theme a farmer on toil. It is a down to earth poem.

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Danae Kavouridi 03 July 2012

lively.brought images to my mind.Well done :)

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Kaila George 01 July 2012

That is beautiful...unfornate for me, my grandparents lived over seas, so I never actually really knew them, but what you write here is indeed very touching, wish I knew my grandparents like you did. Thank you for sharing.

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Karen Sinclair 01 July 2012

Gorgeous dear friend...this lovely write has me experiencing nostalgia for my grandfathers existence... loved the bustop and signs btw... your bud karen :)

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The Reader 30 June 2012

Wordsworthian & Picturesque! ! !

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Heather Wilson 27 June 2012

A beautiful poem, remembering time with your grandpa enjoying the wonder of nature

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Indira Babbellapati 24 June 2012

wonderful, doctor! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Captain Cur 24 June 2012

Beautiful symbolic poem tying the labors of man to the mysteries of his Lord.

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