The Farewell To Love Comments

Sad... Can a love be so corrosive? Can you write as beautifully about happiness, about the bright future ahead, about the clouds in the sky and the lovely child who's being born?

wonderful....simply spellbinding....i see a long line of love poetry from you in ph... thank you.......

Hi Abhay, welcome to PH! I see some lovely poetry in future from you. This one was amazing, smooth flowing too. Preets

beautiful flowing poem - thanks for posting it, Steve