The Far And Gray Comments

Your reading and commenting on my poem 'Invisible Artist' has linked me to your work and boy am I happy? This stuff is great - soothing rhythm, strong images, natural flow. I really enjoyed it. Shall be reading more of you. Take care

I like the poem and have a few questions: To what does 'It' refer in 'It fills the void of dreams enjoyed'? And to what does the flame refers in 'A gust of flame' - to the brief existence of the soul of man? Does it in 'And it impends and it stalks' refer to time as stalking life? Does the flowing river in 'Onward flows the swollen river' refer to the river of life? I found your poem very interesting and am looking forward to your reply, Kind regards, Margaret.

thanks for appreciating my poem. Well, you're one of the best writer I have read. You got excellent poetical style of presenting your sublime thoughts. Thanks and best wishes. Melvin Banggollay Tabuk, Kalinga, Philippines

I like how you've conveyed the deep emotional flow throughout the poem in rhyming verse-form - extremely well. Coll

Absolutely beautiful! The poesy (? right word) of the rhyming is wonderful, and the images are great, too.