Saturday, January 31, 2009

The Fantasy Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dangling by its sides,
The twigs and leaves,
Keep dancing to and fro
Making the tree swing in air.
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Y Sunita Devi
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This reminds me of Enid Blyton's book The Magic Faraway Tree, which I used to sit in a tree and read. This poem has a lovely swing to it and lots of imagery to savor. 10 love Karin

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Sebastine Humaemo 02 February 2009

ahhhh too lovely......Natures beauty is been described in your lines in a soothing way.......the fourth n fifth para makes one to think for a while....lines which speaks abt fantasy tree is every child's desire and dream..........hmmm no words to describe t.........full credits fr this work.........10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ sebastine....

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