The Fantasy Land Comments

Freespirits are the sole residents Everyone is his own president! ! a poem which longs to wish seeing a pure world! ! this song is wonderful;

wow! yours poem is really nice and the poetic lines and rhyme scheme is also great

really it is a nice poem

Magical Fantasy: -) Very well written Freespirit Juneja

so thoughtful! ! ! ! ! !

a good poem.... wonderfully composed!

I like the theme of this place you have created, humans living in harmony, well concieved and thought out. I have to agree with Valerie about the second verse. Good writing......

Again, a nice poem - I think the second line of the second verse needs looking at, and I don`t know what `brownian motion` is. Otherwise, very good.

A really wonderful poem, like it.

I would love to be in fantasy land...beautiful world described marvelously.... :)

A visit to Utopia! a true and positive poet's imagination does not need a passport-visa things for such a visit, and he does not visit alone, but by the technique of impressionism carries us along too...in the world of the fever n the fret, it's a happy release though...the poem says aloud let's don't think about the dream-break....

Every tormented soul would like to visit that very land.A Utopia! Fantastic job with strong power of imagination!

Is it a land on earth? it must be great place to visit, i wanna try brownian movement...hahaha joking, i wonder if the sky is not blue but different hue...and the tree can talk to bird and we see it around the house, fantasy land a new land to discover but that is only a land that placed in your mind...Bring it out here just a as a written one but give our mind a ticket to visit sometime :) keep writing! _Unwritten Soul

i want to be inthe fantasy land...........................

A very nice feel good factor to this piece that flows with good rhythm to maintain the sentiment of the poem. Good work

good one dear..! ! keep it up

happens only in fantasy land, , , , , , , , , , , i can see the words, , , , , , , , , , very good.

if only this fantasy land becomes real....i am dreaming...so nice it should be