Saturday, October 6, 2007

The Fan In My Room Comments

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A machine
But yet so alive
Singing a lullaby
A sad moaning one
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Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................
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rajagopal haran 28 October 2007

Great going Reshma; your observation is great; in the following stanza spacing between no and one in both the lines will flavour to the poem; God Bless You Noone notices him now Noone cares for him All his dreams got scattered All his happiness were gone................

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Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................

Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................

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Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................
Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................
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