The Family Room. For Mary. Comments

Thank you Michael. Now that you've said I am the ''Mary'' I had to officially thank you. :) Sincerely, mary

This is a powerful piece Michael. It flows wonderfully and drags out each line for scrutiny: not found wanting. The language is beautiful without being romantic. I think that the last three verses complete this piece well.

Michael, While there are many ''Mary's'' here I will not assume this is for me.......but, let me say I couldn't fight the goosebumps from creeping upon me while I read this! It's amazing how you've described something so personal to me, that I've never been able to but into words myself. The depth of this is what struck me. It's like you've actually been listening, and you understand. That dark room full of whispers is becoming less and less cluttered with each passing day. I think the way you put this as a personal thing....that much goes on without the family even realizing it, is so 'right on point'. This poem is going to my favorites (and being printed out) ! I don't know how you do it but, you truly are an inspiration and a beautiful soul. Sincerely, Mary