Wednesday, April 29, 2009

The Fallen Tree Comments

Rating: 4.9

The fallen tree lies still
Amongst the hush of autumn morn,
And dwells within a weeded tomb
Upon an amber bed,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 November 2017

Oh! Deep feeling of loss. Nice artistic work. You may like to rate my poem: The Fallen Tree Thanks

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Tailor Bell 15 July 2009

metaphorically exudes the feeling of loss. actually, the departure of any life now triggers my sentimental side, daresay, sometimes more for the less socialized than is often acceptable. a wonderful portrait you have painted here, andrew. excellent read. -Tailor

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~ Jon London ~ 10 May 2009

You always amaze me with your ability to deliver such beautiful scenes Andrew, in this piece you have painted life in such a genius way....i adore your craft my friend

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Poor darling tree. I feel like crying. It is because you have built your imagery so well into the sad fate of its surroundings. Your word pictures are amazing and I think you see so much beauty and sadness always and everywhere. This is why your talent is one of a Master Poet. 10 Karin Anderson

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Bonnie Collins 06 May 2009

Andrew, what a beautifully written peace, penned with so very much sadness, and I can relate so well, as it had its life, and now bidding you farewell, however remember life's cycle, the ants now have a haven, the moss now can blanket its once very prowd and sturdy trunk, the insects now will live off the moss, and life will recylce its world..... Lovely written, from the center of my heart I give you a 10 plus........

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C. P. Sharma 06 May 2009

Wonderful choice of words, awesome imagery, lilting music and master song smith singing of the soul. CP

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Ernestine Northover 03 May 2009

Beautiful words, woven into a delightful painting. Again I can picture the scene. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 29 April 2009

Very poignant and beautiful. I have never forgotten the great elm tree that graced our backyard for so many years. This gentle giant continues to appear in my dreams. IMO, this is one of your best. Warm regards, Sandra

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