Wednesday, January 16, 2013

The Fallen Tree And The Chilren Comments

Rating: 5.0

all its leaves fell
the morning after the storm
and what you see
are the twigs which look
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 November 2017

You may like to rate my poem: The Fallen Tree

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 November 2017

Oh! Brilliant poem. ...far from the place where children still remember how climbing it's branches had been a delight of their memories ...that's a 10++++ poem

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