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After reading this poem I was feeling proud of the soldiers....so nice poem

Fallen Soldier All Alone Fallen Soldier Far From Home Lying Motionless On The Ground, The Battle Raging All Around. For Now He Is Not All Alone. This Fallen Soldier Is Welcomed Home..yes such honour is for our soldiers who lay downtheir lives for our well being and safety....brave soldiers you are not alone inthis world...we, , countrymencare and love you....lovely poem...10 read mine territorial integrity...bullet proof... martyrs

This was the most amazing poem i have ever read. You....I cant even say how I feel about this poem.

yo awsoem poem i so got inspired to write about a soldier. your poem i so real, you could tell you put your heart in to that poem

hey dude, awsome poem. i hope you dont mind, but i kinda took the first 4 lines of the poem and tried to recreate it. that was before i saw the rest of it, and realized mine doesnt really compare. but this is what i got.... Fallen Soldier all alone, Fallen Soldier far from home Trickling down his face a tear Forgetting how it feels to fear Thinking back to home his dear The only one he holds sincere Wondering how things could go so sour Wanting only her his dieing hour Knowing things couldn't be the same Lieing there feeling alone and lame With multiple shotwounds throughout his chest Begging his comrades to put him to rest His dieing breath he feels her kiss Wanting only one last wish To be with her and nothing else... i kept your poem in mind when i went to basic training and wrote the rest there about a girl i was with...but once again, mine doesnt even compare to yours, great work!

Soldiers will always be at home as long as those back home never forget...or at least this soldier will

This Poem Is Great! You Seriously Need To Write Another One!

Wow! That is an amazing poem! Great job!

This poem is so beautfil its hows how much a soldier is not alone! ! thank you for writing this poem good luck on ur next one! !

Well I have to say that this poem is best I have read in a long long time. You should definetly write another one. You have a great talent

This is an amazing poem, and by far the best I have read yet. I am currently in the process of compiling a group of poems that I am sending to our troops overseas. I would love to able to include this one. You can email me at soldiersangels01@hotmail.com

this poem is a very beautiful poem and i would say it is one of my favorites on this site so far