Friday, February 8, 2019

The Fallen Leaves Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fallen leaves lay bare and cold;
Monuments of a sad love story;
Withered, brown and crushed they lay;
Waiting for the earth to be their grave;
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Nikhila Churia
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Satwika 26 August 2019

Beautiful ๐Ÿ˜Š

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C F 02 May 2019

Thank you for sharing your beautifully expressed sentiments. So sad but that is life, nothing is permanent.10+

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 February 2019

A wonderful soulful poem and you have employed the imagery effectively in metaphor. Really great poetry. Kudos. Pleez do comment my newest poem too titled, 'when life was really child's play'

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Nidhin 09 February 2019

Wow ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘

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Akhila Prakash 08 February 2019

Beautiful poem๐Ÿ˜Š

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Remya Sarath 08 February 2019

Well rendered feelings๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 February 2019

A nice poem, Nikhila. Read my poem Love and L u s t.Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 February 2019

Beautifully written, Nikhila...10++++

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