Monday, July 5, 2010

¨the Fallen Bride Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lulled myself to sleep, while crying
The thought of you, got my heart dying
Readied tears are falling from my eyes
They fall for you, as rain from the skies
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Mallory Piña Villa
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 August 2010

Excellent canvas and full of emotion…applause…so much feeling…bloom and nurture in poetry… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 July 2010

love yet cries at criss cross, quite poignant, and evocative love when unrequited,10++, thanks for sharing

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