Thursday, November 23, 2017

The Fallen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a cute young tree
Bees invaded my kraal;
Hid under my leaves,
During scorching days
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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 November 2018

A powerful and wonderful poem on life and love. Very touching lines. Beautifully crafted.10

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 November 2018

Much appreciate you having layed a courageous comments on my work...

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Lincoln 25 June 2018

Wow! This is so poetic that almost every word it's a pan...10+++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 June 2018

Thanks Lincoln with your kind comments on this poem. Much appreciated

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Simon 25 June 2018

I really like this poem... it's relavant enough to be taught at high school institutions.... It consists of many metaphors and simile, and mostly its title is a personication of an old woman

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 June 2018

Thanks Simonsbath for your positive feedback to this poem.stay blessed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2018

I am utterly fascinated with this wonderful poem! I greatly admire the adorable style of your penning! The first line the use of 'simile' is abstracted so powerfully! Appreciated the piece of work! (10)

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I admire your positive comments in this poem....you add my love for poetry...

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Brian 17 May 2018

I hope to write a poem and post it as well

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Thanks Brian for your positive contribution to this poem...wait for the right moment, your instinct will tell you when to write...

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Brian 17 May 2018

From you to being old, your simile, metaphors and personification is just amazing in this lovely sad love poem...

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I appreciate your feedback on my poems....be blessed

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Chazz 15 May 2018

Lovely poem with emotional grief, thanks I read it.

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Thanks Chazz for you love this poem... Thanks for reading my work

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A creative and compelling composition that is both rich and refreshing!

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Thanks for your positive comments...much appreciate it. Be blessed

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Simon 02 December 2017

Lovell poem Lungelo, the tree is a lady, bees are the boys, branches her arms, a fruit, , , , , , ? You tell me, for they like it...All hiden details.10++++++++

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Thanks Simon for your feedback....stay blessed

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 November 2017

Like a dirty cloud! ! But the bee still flies around. Thanks for sharing.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 28 November 2017

Thanks for your comments. Dirty cloud💨

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

Sadness with love is brilliantly expressed in this wisely penned poem.10

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 November 2017

Thanks. I really appreciate your acknowledgement. You may like to rate my new poem: Cry My Tears Cry Thanks

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