Like a cute young tree
Bees invaded my kraal;
Hid under my leaves,
During scorching days
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Thanks Lincoln with your kind comments on this poem. Much appreciated
I really like this poem... it's relavant enough to be taught at high school institutions.... It consists of many metaphors and simile, and mostly its title is a personication of an old woman
Thanks Simonsbath for your positive feedback to this poem.stay blessed.
I am utterly fascinated with this wonderful poem! I greatly admire the adorable style of your penning! The first line the use of 'simile' is abstracted so powerfully! Appreciated the piece of work! (10)
I admire your positive comments in this poem....you add my love for poetry...
Thanks Brian for your positive contribution to this poem...wait for the right moment, your instinct will tell you when to write...
From you to being old, your simile, metaphors and personification is just amazing in this lovely sad love poem...
A creative and compelling composition that is both rich and refreshing!
Thanks for your positive comments...much appreciate it. Be blessed
Lovell poem Lungelo, the tree is a lady, bees are the boys, branches her arms, a fruit, , , , , , ? You tell me, for they like it...All hiden details.10++++++++
Like a dirty cloud! ! But the bee still flies around. Thanks for sharing.
Sadness with love is brilliantly expressed in this wisely penned poem.10
Thanks. I really appreciate your acknowledgement. You may like to rate my new poem: Cry My Tears Cry Thanks
A powerful and wonderful poem on life and love. Very touching lines. Beautifully crafted.10
Much appreciate you having layed a courageous comments on my work...