Saturday, December 15, 2012

The Fall Comments

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In the end we fall
I'm alone through it all
You said you'd be there across the hall
In case I ever needed you at all
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Sarah Mohyla
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Sandy Player 22 December 2012

It's darkly truthful; very final and unquestionable. I like your style-M

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Leon Somer 16 December 2012

Magnificent! The emotion is almost tangible through your words, what a sad longing feeling they express! Very good. Very good indeed.

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Sarah Mohyla

Sarah Mohyla

Lovettsville, Virginia
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