The Fall Comments

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with conviction. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

I love this! My favorite lines are the earth seems moving, the sky seems falling and how I ended in an accident. keep writing!

A sad, but lovely and precious poem

this is a wonderful poem...I held my breath till the very end...even in life, I guess, one must let go sometimes, throw away the burden of living and just enjoy life the way it is...

Love this poem. Great work!

This was an amazing experience to read, that is until it ended lol. Still It's often not the destination that matters, but the journey. An amazing write! ~ ~Nika

How did you write the poem afterward? Did you use a ouija board?

i love this poem it is amazing

Intense and pitiful poem An entire life...just dismissed, then gone A tedious existence with no luxury of peace to truly reflect A precious life lost and faded away So much potential, not realized but abandoned A shame

I close my eyes and the last of my breath slips by. nice write enjoyed

I am missed in mists. Very good poem.

Nice way of describing in a smooth and simple lang. love it so much i admire such simply effective poems thank you for share it with us regards

What a great write, so beautifully laid out, truly a wonderful way of describing a tragic end, breath taking

Good Work, it was my email today

this is a wonderful poem, the concept is a marvellous one, i like it....keep it up....and you are a brilliant poetess.please read my new poems.

the idea of hanging from a cliff, falling, crashing on the ground is breath-taking when taken figuratively...Well done, Blossom, and keep it up. Is Blossom Mist your real name? It doesn't sound Indian...

Thank you...... my dear! ! ! I am really elated

One of the best ways Death can ever be defined.No one remembers how they arrived on to death.. Great work..

Thank you Vipin for the lovely comment

Alluring penning/i enjoy reading this poem! ! top marks! !