Thursday, June 11, 2009

* The Fall * Comments

Rating: 4.4

The mist crosses
The lonesome ocean
With sporadic sighs
Making a huge comeback
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2009

Hope of pro-creation Another frontier Another land New religion New language another dream land to venture....beautiful...10' read mine dramland mary to marry and miss i miss u

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Melissia Ann Senter 01 August 2009

A very deep, meaningful, and most excellent poem, imagitive and fantastic write thanks for sharing Melissia Ann

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 July 2009

From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 10: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: The Fall 'The Fall' is a very deep and meaningful poem. Good job asusual. Best, Ulveena Aitzaz

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Hey, that was nice! Credible..10

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Surya . 03 July 2009

really imaginative. looks like a new dawn in on.nice to read. haunting too a10+++ from me surya

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Saadat Tahir 01 July 2009

A fantastic.. thoughtful poem …contains.. beautiful ideas ...loved it.... well done ….nice work! cheers

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Jerik Middleton 28 June 2009

great poem...awesome wording and amazing message behind the words...loved it let me know when you right another one so i can read it love your work!

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Anthony Han 25 June 2009

Nice poem, i didnt have time to read this sooner but finally did and its amazin, very deep and has nice words to it good work 10+

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Duh Huh 25 June 2009

i agree with Lalay and Sumaira. Its a deep and magical poem. Thank you for sharing :)

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Lalay Allan 24 June 2009

This is very deep and profound, my friend. Thought provoking piece is your signature. Congratulations! Thanks for leading me to read this.

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Marie Diop 22 June 2009

Beautiful poem. Just lovely. :)

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

very interesting piece...

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Livvy Peacock 21 June 2009

Beautiful writing - i love it - 10

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Azadeh Nemati 21 June 2009

this poem is very rough, it is interesting in a way!

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sumaira .....ir 21 June 2009

g8! ! ..u have magic in your hands dear.. SUPERB! ! +++++++++10 wid lov sumaira

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 June 2009

this is a beautful one friend/....diction you v used can mesmerize many hearts...thanks for this one 1o regards shan

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Shaik Zakeer Hussain 21 June 2009

A very beautiful piece of work. keep writing brother.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 June 2009

Fall is a great poem from a deep heart.

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Maxislam Beauty 20 June 2009

This is all very great than I can ever Imagine.

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Ernest Riis Bansah 20 June 2009

nice poem...keep writing more

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