* The Fall * Comments

Hope of pro-creation Another frontier Another land New religion New language another dream land to venture....beautiful...10' read mine dramland mary to marry and miss i miss u

A very deep, meaningful, and most excellent poem, imagitive and fantastic write thanks for sharing Melissia Ann

From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 10: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: The Fall 'The Fall' is a very deep and meaningful poem. Good job asusual. Best, Ulveena Aitzaz

Hey, that was nice! Credible..10

really imaginative. looks like a new dawn in on.nice to read. haunting too a10+++ from me surya

A fantastic.. thoughtful poem …contains.. beautiful ideas ...loved it.... well done ….nice work! cheers

great poem...awesome wording and amazing message behind the words...loved it let me know when you right another one so i can read it love your work!

Nice poem, i didnt have time to read this sooner but finally did and its amazin, very deep and has nice words to it good work 10+

i agree with Lalay and Sumaira. Its a deep and magical poem. Thank you for sharing :)

This is very deep and profound, my friend. Thought provoking piece is your signature. Congratulations! Thanks for leading me to read this.

Beautiful poem. Just lovely. :)

very interesting piece...

Beautiful writing - i love it - 10

this poem is very rough, it is interesting in a way!

g8! ! ..u have magic in your hands dear.. SUPERB! ! +++++++++10 wid lov sumaira

this is a beautful one friend/....diction you v used can mesmerize many hearts...thanks for this one 1o regards shan

A very beautiful piece of work. keep writing brother.

Fall is a great poem from a deep heart.

This is all very great than I can ever Imagine.

nice poem...keep writing more