Wednesday, February 1, 2023

The Falcon Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can recall another lifetime, one where I could fly
Gazing down upon the earth, moonlight glinting in my eye
A king among the stars with a piercing call that could terrify
I was once a mighty falcon, a raptor of the sky
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Lee Geoghegan
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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2023

Great descriptive write! Full of thrilling imagery.

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Lee Geoghegan 02 February 2023

Thank you Nosheen, I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 February 2023

the poem has been crafted allegorically; nice to read

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Lee Geoghegan 02 February 2023

Thank you Mahtab.

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Rob Lamberton 01 February 2023

Great falcon imagery!

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Lee Geoghegan 02 February 2023

Cheers Rob.

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