Saturday, March 8, 2014

The Fairies Treasure Day Comments

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It's the fairies treasure day
So lets go there right away
I really hope there'll be lights
As shiny as stars that will shine so bright.
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Lianah Quero
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Mary Douglas 20 August 2014

I like the delicate, fairylike quality of what you i write. And I would like to go where the trees sing too! What a happy image. How wonderful to make poems where people can go and see things that are fantastically beautiful, the power of poetry and in each poet completely different. Dandy cakes too. Such a rarely used but perfect word. Dandy cakes have got to taste richer than cakes that do not have that adjective in front of them. Just delightful, Lianah, Thank You! Mary Angela Douglas

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