Saturday, July 24, 2010

The Failure Of Etymology, Dedicated To Poetiwife Comments

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There is no talented characterization for the grace on your eyes,
Nor is there equivalence in the kingdom of miraculous paradise
Every field of etymology becomes disabled in front of your glance;
What you have left as a trace over me is written in my own sense
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The wind over my head is performing a hilarious and blissful dance wonderful personification of the wind, mixed with some inspiring images

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Omar Ibrahim 25 July 2010

if Egypt was still a part of the ottoman empire that would be great! because we would have great poets to feel proud of! the poem is very 'poetic'! you know what i mean? your use of an aesthetic language and your fine choice of expressions from your big diction had its effect on the poem and made it worth to be put beside shakespear and keats.this poem is from my favorites. thanks for sharing

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An insightful write, yet also makes one meditate on the words. True love has a language all of its own! ; D

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Louis Rams 24 July 2010

the studying of words can not be found, when it involves a love profound. what you feel in your heart will show in your face, as a picture which can not be replaced. GR888888T WRITE

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