Wednesday, May 28, 2014

The Failed Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this dance we drag
our feet, it's become
little more than a way
to avoid stumbling.
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Daniel Brick
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2022

Absolutely wonderful.... nicely encapsulated. Loved the theme.

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Simone Inez Harriman 17 April 2015

Daniel this is such a lovely poem. The dance of life has complicated steps that some of us never master. Simone xxx

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Noreen Carden 02 June 2014

There are no words to do justice to the beauty of your words Daniel I love this poem So beautifully written a ten for sure

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Md Elias Uddin 30 May 2014

Brick is always brilliant!

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Daniel Brick

St. Paul MN
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