Friday, July 25, 2008

The Factories Have All Gone Comments

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The factories have all gone where once
The smoking stacks did stand,
So too their famous silhouettes
That stood upon this land,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 30 July 2008

I could almost see the buildings left to ruin Andrew You write so skillfully Love duncan X

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James B. Earley 27 July 2008

My friend....a nation.....has lost its soul!

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Ernestine Northover 25 July 2008

A fantastic write and a fantastic ending. Very well written indeed Andrew, loved the nostalgia and the poignancy of this poem. A real treat to read it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Lynda Robson 25 July 2008

Everything has changed now Andrew, a friend of mine sent me a newspaper cutting of the Goodyear stack being pulled done, it was once the main employer in that area, very well penned piece, Lynda xx

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