Wednesday, January 6, 2016

The Faces Of You Comments

Rating: 4.8

It's too long
The distance between
What you say
And what you mean
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Nosheen Irfan
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

Distant love; but with hope. Nice work.

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Manonton Dalan 08 January 2016

lying heart hehehhehe

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Distance between faces is measured to make meet in hope of expression. Very wonderful poem shared.10

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Rajnish Manga 06 January 2016

You have put across very succinctly the whole gamut of a flimsy relationship witnessing an erosion of mutual faith. Very impressive portrayal with brevity. Thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 January 2016

Thank you so much Rajnish for your thoughtful analysis.

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