Sunday, January 18, 2015

The Faces Of Loneliness Comments

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At times, the sky appears so lonely,
Dressing in its many shades of blue,
And at night wearing a veil of black,
Is it mourning for love it once knew?
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Lora Colon
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 January 2015

Well, Lora, my friend, this was awesome. Your carried me along in your sadness until the watery end. It was a beautiful love poem, well done! Loyd C Taylor

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Md Elias Uddin 25 January 2015

I think I'll go back to that river, My dreams of love I'll try to renew, While I sleep 'neath that blanket of tears And seek the ghost of love I once knew Go, hurry up, and get your dreams renewed! Go back to that river of tears and fill your eyes with tears anew, for they'll soon run short of the same! Go, hurry up, until it's too late!

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Lyn Paul 24 January 2015

I can feel your Words and My arms reach out to you.

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Howard Mcdougal 18 January 2015

Fabulous write thanks for sharing.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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