In the rush hour
On the subway
Fantasizing:
If the time could
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But yet you have painted this fine piece of art.Loads of tallent here.Love Duncan
I like the fantasy of this poem, but not sure I like the last 'paint' line. Maybe if you mention being an artist earlier then it would make more sense. - chuck
I wish it was that easy, to be able to visualize our love and paint him or her so that we would recognize them when they arrive! We should be so lucky.
Julia, I found this very thought prevoking. Nice poem. Love Gyp's
Julia, your art is expressed so eloquently in your words... beautifully done! Brian