Friday, July 12, 2013

The Face Of Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

The inner fabric of our mind
consumed with derelict and waste.
What energy is spent-what cost to fuel such putrid hate?
The walls we build to save our soul;
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Alexander Beebe
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Jesse Ellsbury 13 July 2013

A very well-done poem. I like the shift to the courtroom metaphor at the end. You have a lot of really memorable phrases in here. Great job!

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Dave Walker 12 July 2013

A fantastic poem, reads beautifully with a great flow.

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