It stood alone, this old Church of grey,
tombstones scattered around in disarray.
Naming Squires and skivvies who’d lived and died
in this Hamlet, and now lay side by side.
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You capture the light of the divine in this fine descriptive piece. Beautiful images of stained glass and silence of sunset and stone. An atmospheric and spiritual delight. love, Allie xxxx
Although I've never claimed to be a religious person...I still think that there is a special feeling that comes from being in a wonderful church, with sun streaming through stained glass. Somehow...it seems akin to nature...peaceful. Hugs, Dee
Ernestine this poem captures the multi-layered summoning of His love-fest! 'The Face of Christ' is truly a fine piece of writing. The depth the poem operates powerfully on so many levels; I especially enjoyed the way you skillfully weave His goodness with imagery. Blessings, Debora
Excellent Ernestine, felt I was there in that place, well worth a ten from me, love Lynda xx
This is great, Ernestine! Amazing imagery and a divine message. Beautifully done! !
Absolutely beautiful, Ernestine. It gave me goosebumps! Marilyn
Yes. I'm agnostic too but this is a brilliant, atmospheric, engaging portrayal. t x
I'm not really religious like that, I'm agnostic in fact, but you have some pretty imagery in this poem. I liked it.
Isn't it amazing what we can see without actually being there at the scene Skillfully written though with a tinge of sadness added Well done Love duncan X