Tuesday, April 22, 2008

The Face In The Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.5

Look through my eyes and tell me who you see in the mirror?
You see a girl oh so bright, oh so sweet and oh so full of life?
But is that really me?
All I see is a broken faith, a heart torn apart and a false lie of a life
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 August 2008

lovely! I like the words, All I know is that the face staring back at me in the mirror isn't me. keep writing! could you read and comment on my poems? Specially, Mirror. Thank you. Gracias!

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