The Face Comments
Neither her attire nor her demeanor
spoke of a life of riches..
Nor reflected one of abject penury,
Just another old woman.…
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written with good imagery. a good portrait painted with your pen
A vivid portrayal, I can 'see' the woman before my eyes thanks to imagery and metaphors employed nicely.
Life's experiences furrowed there Like a farmer's land carefully tilled…loved these lines................I invite you to read and comment on them if you can.Thank you.Keep it up!
All has been said, nothing to reserve here. Superb setting, imagery well presented. It's a perfect write indeed. By the way, have you seen mine lately? I have like butterfly in the house, falling int lips and the like. Regards!
(life's experiences furrowed there like a farmer's land carefully tilled........) image of the past years are greatly expressed.
Beautiful...........................reflections on a life : o)
The face - a reflection of the agony and ecstasy of living! Great write! ! ! ! Top markss
The face - a reflection of the agony and ecstasy of living! Millions of faces in India holding their faith and culture as the rosary beads counting day after after all their life! I love my India!
A great write, deep and prfound! I have potrayed a similar old woman in one of my poems - Alone in the Crowd. I invite you to read it! giving you a 10 for this excellent rendition!
a peeping passion of the past. and a revolving shadow of the essence of Life, Excellent...God bless
This make me think of the lines in my sweet grandmother face. I remember the tears running down her face and the water would flood her wrinkles like a mighty river. So beautiful it' a 10 RANDY ~*~
Beauty of the furrowed face with mystifying tranquility can only be felt through minds eye.An excellent poem.
A nice depiction of a lady who is spiritually rich. Loved your diction and the theme as well.
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7/22/2025 7:13:33 PM # 1.0.0
s if she beheld the world from a dimension beyond thanks for poem 10+++++++++