Tuesday, December 11, 2007

The Eyes When Burn Blue Comments

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As her eyes when redeem first
The time yet excels ever all mundane
As she curves her smiles on her lips
As dappled of colors by the artist over the canvas.
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Dawn Fuzan 14 May 2014

Dr, Amazing poetic style here, well done

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Patrice James 23 December 2007

another beautiful write, thanks for sharing.

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Ewigi Liebe 17 December 2007

If you should look into a starlit night and see a reflection of me know only that I will one day come crashing again to the shore swept homeward by the pull of the tide and you? These emotional words have touched me beyond expressions, I have myself lost the love of one that truly will always remain in my heart.

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Broken Peaces 12 December 2007

Dr. Sumptious piece of writting and as E. L. says we learn a lot by reading each others work, the understanding we gain is tremendous regards Chris voted

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Elizabeth Sheaffer 11 December 2007

I always enjoy reading poems written by people who aren't from the United States, and I don't wish this to offer offense against your nationality, because they open up my mind to new ways of thinking and writing that I otherwise would never be exposed to. In the end, I am improved as a writer, as a scholar, and as a human being. This is a lovely poem, and deserving of the utmost recognition. Warmest Regards, Eliza Stine

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