Saturday, May 17, 2008

The Eyes Say It All… Comments

Rating: 4.8

The heart weeps,
For itself; its bearer,
Giving vent to the feelings,
Of loss, despair,
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Mehreen Tahir
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~ Jon London ~ 31 May 2008

Heartfelt......every line a fresh flow of emotion....you can't beat real feeling....Amazing poem '10' best wishes Jon

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The agonizing details, The eyes are empty, while the twitching succumb to the lethal injection of sobriety the undulating contours recompose to a bland plane but eyes go on narrating fables of feelings of tremors and after shocks it speaks of alien geography of soul in this saline lucidity of silence blind seeth and deaf hearken

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Greenwolfe 1962 18 May 2008

I detected some real feeling in this poem. It may not be of recent vintage, but it is still present it the writing as if it were so. GW62

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Laurence Overmire 17 May 2008

Yes, indeed. And the poet gives eyes to those unspoken truths.

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