Sunday, August 31, 2014

The Eyes Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

No matter how hard,
Anyone tries,
It's only the Eyes,
That can express.
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Sandra Feldman
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Dimitrios Galanis 03 January 2016

I find in it the climate of my poem 'At lucky to grasp' but beautifully sumerized.You described it with such a shortness!

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Michael Mcparland 09 September 2014

It's the most beautiful look on earth to express the most sincere and fulfilling feeling on earth.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 September 2014

This poem is a piece of gem that sparkles with each of the last seven lines. 'The Eyes of Love' is an eye catching title, that crowns a poem that sits on my heart, just as a butterfly would alight on a sprightly flower. Very poetic, very sensitive observation.10/10.

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Daniel Brick 01 September 2014

THE FEELINGS NO WORDS CAN EXPRESS/THE EYES TRANSLATE INTO CARESS. That is a perfect closing couplet for this poem. The emotions of the poem come to rest here in the confidence that tenderness will prevail. In a prose context this sentence would be seen as something to develop further or even prove. But poetry knows better! The poem has brought us to a state of awareness which is blessed. After reading a poem like yours full of sweetness and light how could anyone say an unkind word?

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Somanathan Iyer 01 September 2014

If one can follow language of eyes, then words have no value! nice poem.

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