Monday, June 8, 2009

The Eyes Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

beauty of the ocean had gone by
wind swiped it dreadfully
nothing was there under the sea bed
only memories left on my head.
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lady grace
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Obinna Eruchie 07 September 2009

She has found true love in the eyes of love, despite his financial status-for 'money cannot buy love'. Nice one.

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a new set of eyes you created for me as love in this sense I now look in at a new perspective now great work well done 10/10

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Angelica Ayman 21 June 2009

i love that poem it's really good! ! ! 10+++ hope to see more best regards

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 June 2009

a naive love poem. shan

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Howard Kern 19 June 2009

wow! ! ! I beleive you have hir the nail square on the head, and drove it home with just one blow. Exelent10++ keep on sharing lady Grace

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Stevens Cadet 19 June 2009

This is a good poem. I like the theme behind it but the only thing i would say is the rhythm seems off at times but still a good poem.

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Hana Behrs 19 June 2009

I really like this one, keep writing :)

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Howard Kern 18 June 2009

Quads have been very good to you very nice this is a good one! ! ! Thanks for sharing have a blessed day howard

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Rafique Farooqi 16 June 2009

love is prosperious in it`s worth, wayward winds of time wipe it`s glories, what so ever, the stability of fragile love lies in the fist of loving hearts

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Noel Horlanda 16 June 2009

a profoundly written, a true dedication to a beloved. Nothing negative on this piece of work, lines are in deep thoughts, full of emotions and wisely said. However, what I believe that the eyes of love couldn't see, it's blind, isn't it? Thanks

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Lalitha iyer 16 June 2009

The eyes of love are full of warmth it caresses you with hands invisible fills you with life and energy in strife it sends you messages fuelled with urge to strive.

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

he wore nothing on his lips except a beautiful smile... Wonderful. Great. Yes true love never looks for wealth, position, assets etc. Kudos.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 15 June 2009

Hi, it's indeed true, we don't need anything to be happy... because happiness is about feeling not about something :) great work!

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Victor Gama Sabbithi 15 June 2009

Very beautiful, As I read - I can see. and feel.

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Rafique Farooqi 14 June 2009

happiness is always with feelings of heart and mind '''' beautifull

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Vibhu Ashok 14 June 2009

Vert True, Love is like that only, if it can be bought through anything else then, it is no love at all, Love is just Love

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Zeinab Sherif 14 June 2009

And this is the eye of love.i'm happy that there is someone who understand the real meaning of love.

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sky dreams 14 June 2009

this is truly a beautiful poem.. it reminds me of the movie tristan and isolde.. im usually not one for love poems but this really is an amazing poem.

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Ashley Hall 14 June 2009

I love it. It's true and it feels so straight from the heart. It makes you think about what love really is. Beautiful.

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Rose MaryB. 14 June 2009

That is so true. I liked it alot.

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