beauty of the ocean had gone by
wind swiped it dreadfully
nothing was there under the sea bed
only memories left on my head.
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a new set of eyes you created for me as love in this sense I now look in at a new perspective now great work well done 10/10
i love that poem it's really good! ! ! 10+++ hope to see more best regards
wow! ! ! I beleive you have hir the nail square on the head, and drove it home with just one blow. Exelent10++ keep on sharing lady Grace
This is a good poem. I like the theme behind it but the only thing i would say is the rhythm seems off at times but still a good poem.
Quads have been very good to you very nice this is a good one! ! ! Thanks for sharing have a blessed day howard
love is prosperious in it`s worth, wayward winds of time wipe it`s glories, what so ever, the stability of fragile love lies in the fist of loving hearts
a profoundly written, a true dedication to a beloved. Nothing negative on this piece of work, lines are in deep thoughts, full of emotions and wisely said. However, what I believe that the eyes of love couldn't see, it's blind, isn't it? Thanks
The eyes of love are full of warmth it caresses you with hands invisible fills you with life and energy in strife it sends you messages fuelled with urge to strive.
he wore nothing on his lips except a beautiful smile... Wonderful. Great. Yes true love never looks for wealth, position, assets etc. Kudos.
Hi, it's indeed true, we don't need anything to be happy... because happiness is about feeling not about something :) great work!
happiness is always with feelings of heart and mind '''' beautifull
Vert True, Love is like that only, if it can be bought through anything else then, it is no love at all, Love is just Love
And this is the eye of love.i'm happy that there is someone who understand the real meaning of love.
this is truly a beautiful poem.. it reminds me of the movie tristan and isolde.. im usually not one for love poems but this really is an amazing poem.
I love it. It's true and it feels so straight from the heart. It makes you think about what love really is. Beautiful.
She has found true love in the eyes of love, despite his financial status-for 'money cannot buy love'. Nice one.