Monday, April 9, 2018

The Eyes Of Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whose eyes are a maze with no escape
The celestial gold of water and fire
Below the titian night thrown to wind
Waters spill jackals howl for the two moons
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Purbesh Mahapatra
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Purbesh 14 April 2018

Thank you Kumarmani Sir

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Welcome to PoemHunter! The celestial gold of water and fire unite in eyes to flow through stream of river in life with Earth of emotion. Eyes are deep enough to hide a secret but the calmness is deeply expressed through vision. Past is gone and you are not now in that but the present flow is visible. When you open or close eyes you only see innocence and love. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned...Giving 10 marks in rating out of 10..

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