My lips denied him
My arms could never hold him
My eyes betrayed me.
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Enjoyed your good three liner. Thanks for sharing Rose Marie 10+
Great write. You have some special ability to write this type of short poem.Thank u.anjandev roy.
Beautifully conceived, poem that is very thought-provoking, loveliest rendered about love Thank you so much for sharing this profound brevity, dear great poetess! A 10 Full Score.
Love is God and God is love, eyes betray but heart is loyal to Him.
Three lines that portray a whole love affair... but in the Philippines, the title may be called " Pakipot" ... Well done Rose Marie! 10+
Love is often bitter. How beautifully you have summed it up in just three lines. Kudos!
A small poem poem sets you thinking. Here eyes betrayed, but even the kiss could have, even the embrace might have. Lovely.
The eyes are the most powerful tool of expression - the barometer of emotion......An excellent pretty poem, dear Ate Rose.......10+++++++++++
Love is blind and is not defined. A short poem that has many layers.
My lips denied him My arms could never hold him My eyes betrayed me.
Brilliant top 5