the brown eyes that are lovely shaped.
it creates a soft expression. As i 
stare in them, im tryin to look and see if your 
hurt. my eyes grow wider because i see that you are.
                
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''it creates a soft a soft expression'' you have another great piece on your hands.

 
                     
                
I have read all your poems. Your creativity is warm. I appreciate the depth of your expression of pain, pleasure and the hope of comfort. Beautiful work!