Thursday, June 16, 2016

The Eyes -2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

These are the eyes
Flaming with fire.

A fire
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Sanjukta Sahoo 18 June 2016

These are the eyes Flaming with fire. A fire Of anger In a defeated leader, Of hunger In a shrewd pleader, Of hatred In a inhuman rapist, Of betrayal In an IS terrorist, Of passion In a bird watcher, Of desire In a sensual lover. A great composition, .Nice poetry. Thanks for the sharing.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

Thanks Sanjukta for these nice words of inspiration.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 18 June 2016

Why do these eyes beam So different each time, With this fire? thanks for the the great poem. A beautiful poem indeed. 10++ for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

Thanks Rini dear for these nice words of inspiration.

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Sabita Sahoo 18 June 2016

A fire Of anger In a defeated leader, Of hunger In a shrewd pleader, Of hatred In a inhuman rapist, Of betrayal In an IS terrorist, Of passion In a bird watcher, Of desire In a sensual lover. A marvellous poem deserving 10+++.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

Thanks Sabita for these nice words of inspiration.

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Susan Williams 16 June 2016

This is a poem that welcomes meditation- -I enjoy poetry that invites the reader to pause and reflect... in this case about eyes that burn with fire. Very well-penned. 10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

Thank you Ma'am for your beautiful remark that freshens the poetic mind. Sorry for the grand delay in responding you.

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